Testimonials

  • "Storybreak’s structural and character input have been invaluable in getting our movies greenlit. They're smart and supportive and can help raise the caliber of any project."

    — Rob Greenberg, Writer The Valet (Hulu, 2022) Writer/Director Overboard (MGM, 2018), Writer/Director How I Met Your Mother (CBS, 2005-2011)

  • "Susan and StoryBreak are my structure guides. Truly invaluable when it comes to character development and cuts/edits. They are crucial to my writing process."

    — Gabrielle Allan, Creator/Executive Producer HouseBroken (Fox, 2021-2023), writer/co-Executive Producer Veep (HBO, 2017-2019), Writer/Co-Executive Producer Scrubs (NBC/ABC 2001-2007)

  • "I’ve used StoryBreak on countless pitches and scripts. I can always count on constructive, game-changing notes and a quick turnaround when I'm under the gun. Their creative input is truly indispensable."

    — Rick Singer, Writer/Co-Executive Producer "The Healing Powers Of Dude" (Netflix, 2020), Writer/Creator/Executive Producer “Pitch" (Fox, 2016), Writer/Supervising Producer “Younger" (TV Land, 2015-2016)

  • "I never try to sell a script or pitch without getting feedback from StoryBreak. Their insights on character development, story structure, scene construction and even jokes is worth every penny. If marrying companies was legal, I would definitely put a ring on the finger of StoryBreak."

    — Michael Ellis, Writer/Consulting Producer Insatiable (Netflix, 2018-2019), writer The Wedding Planner (Sony, 2001)

  • "Susan and StoryBreak helped me take massive amounts of material and find the gold. As someone who had never written a TV pilot, they were geniuses at helping me find hooks, build characters and cut what wasn’t needed. Storybreak brings their whole heart and soul to their clients."

    — Valerie Hager, Writer/Performer "Naked In Alaska: The Behind The Scenes Story of Stripping in The Last Frontier” (Internationally Produced Award-Winning Solo Show and TV pilot).

  • "I have written movies and TV shows for decades, but last year I hit a creative wall. Since working with Susan and StoryBreak, I am unblocked, currently completing a movie and developing several others - with no fear! StoryBreak’s writing expertise is invaluable, but even more helpful are their strategies for goal setting and accountability."

    — Pamela Falk, Writer The Wedding Planner (2001), Writer Invisible Sign (2010)